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Weak
If I had the chance I would talk to you forever
If I had the chance I would tell you not to go
If I had the chance I would tell you that I love
That I love you…forever and for more.

One day my love will linger
One day you'll hear my prayer
One day you'll understand me
Understand that I am here.

Forgive me for not thinking
Forgive me for my words
Forgive me for forcing
Forcing that I must be heard

I didn't think I'd hurt you
I didn't think you'd cry
I didn't think you'd hate me
Hate me, yell and wished I died.

If I had kept my mouth shut
If I had never said a word
If I had never told you
Told you those three strong words.

Maybe my life would linger
Maybe my dreams would win
Maybe I would be stronger
Stronger than I am…

I am not strong enough to win
I am not bound to live
I am going to surrender
Surrender i.e Give in

Weak too weak to live
Weak too weak to love
Weak too weak to care now
Remember me my love...
Just a poem I wrote because I needed to write something, I feel like my brain is shrinking from under use...

:hug: 's to you all

-Carnie
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PsychoticChibiiUsa Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2005  Hobbyist Photographer
Tis very beautiful...
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pixieontheloose Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2005  Student
dude thats cool morbid and tender brittle yet at a strange ease. i dont know if theres a word for that odd depressed cofortably numb feeling but i like it.
keep em coming
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JuNe-tHe-SPOON Featured By Owner May 31, 2005
Ps me is a GOat but a really really really cute GoAt!!!


-June XXXXxxxxxxXXXOOOOOoooOOOOOoo
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JuNe-tHe-SPOON Featured By Owner May 31, 2005
i think its great!!!! Me like really alot!!!!!!!!!! so its about lisha ME Buddy!!!!!!!! me love lisha toooooooo

-June XXXXXXoOOOOOoOOoO
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CarnivalFreak Featured By Owner May 31, 2005
lol not about lisha, I wrote it on the phone to her, but it really has no meaning much ;)
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ApocalypticRaven Featured By Owner May 26, 2005  Professional General Artist
I think you need a hug :cling:
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CarnivalFreak Featured By Owner May 26, 2005
I am ok, the poem is random doesnt reflect anything love you lots hun
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ApocalypticRaven Featured By Owner May 27, 2005  Professional General Artist
Have a hug anyway :hug: Love you lots too :kiss:
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FrozenDruidess Featured By Owner May 23, 2005
I know exactly... sweet. Death is one of the most beautiful parts of romance. If you get my drift...... maybe im just morbid. :crazy:
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FrozenDruidess Featured By Owner May 23, 2005
aawww how sweet.
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